Zitat:
Original von Gildulin
Der Typ ist so ein, ich sag jetzt mal Hausptschüler, ohne Geld und ohne Zukunfstaussichen.
Der Typ ist so ein, ich sag jetzt mal Hausptschüler, ohne Geld und ohne Zukunfstaussichen.
das klingt eher weniger elaboriert
Zitat:
Original von Gregolas
Hallo Hanna
das hatten wir auch in unserer Mappe stehen
Hallo Hanna
das hatten wir auch in unserer Mappe stehen
ich nich du alter streber
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hier ist alles, was wir im unterricht dazu erarbeitet haben:
1) speaker's appearane: -> wears expensive air
jordans
-> suede staters jacket
-> leather adidas baseball cap
-> gucci backpack
-> styling, expensive clothes
-> new but not brand-new
-> thinks himself that he
looks good
2) Why does he need those branded article?
- feel special inside
- when he wears fresh gear -> doesn't have to hide
- when not: ego will explode and crew is laughing
3) robbers love / victims love
robbers love: - needs them for ego
- makes him feel special inside
victims love: - sees gun -> run for them
- wanna die for them
- he doesn't have worries about staying
alive
4) Language:
- I likes / I gots -> gramatically wrong
- He writes as he speaks -> cuz; ta; somethin...
- words he uses (posse)
- a run-on-line = kein Ende des Satzes am Ende der Zeile
- POW -> onamatopoeia (imitation of sound)
- grammar: wrong use of pronouns -> give me them
- repetition: gear; air jordans -> underlines the importance of clothes, sneakers to him
- metaphor: or my ego will pop like a ten cent balloon
- rhymes + rhythmn: a sound effect is achieved -> use of assonance
- every stanza consits of 4 lines
1) speaker's appearane: -> wears expensive air
jordans
-> suede staters jacket
-> leather adidas baseball cap
-> gucci backpack
-> styling, expensive clothes
-> new but not brand-new
-> thinks himself that he
looks good
2) Why does he need those branded article?
- feel special inside
- when he wears fresh gear -> doesn't have to hide
- when not: ego will explode and crew is laughing
3) robbers love / victims love
robbers love: - needs them for ego
- makes him feel special inside
victims love: - sees gun -> run for them
- wanna die for them
- he doesn't have worries about staying
alive
4) Language:
- I likes / I gots -> gramatically wrong
- He writes as he speaks -> cuz; ta; somethin...
- words he uses (posse)
- a run-on-line = kein Ende des Satzes am Ende der Zeile
- POW -> onamatopoeia (imitation of sound)
- grammar: wrong use of pronouns -> give me them
- repetition: gear; air jordans -> underlines the importance of clothes, sneakers to him
- metaphor: or my ego will pop like a ten cent balloon
- rhymes + rhythmn: a sound effect is achieved -> use of assonance
- every stanza consits of 4 lines
Zuletzt bearbeitet von *glitzer-sternchen* am 22.04.2008 um 14:00 Uhr
man könnte übrigens noch anmerken, dass die rote farbe der schuhe den emotionalen hochpunkt des gedichts beschreibt, also sowohl das hochkochen der emotionen --> POW, tot, als auch das blut nahezu verbildlicht.
aaaber. das gehört wohl eher in eine kunstklausur.
aaaber. das gehört wohl eher in eine kunstklausur.
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